===== From zekaric@yahoo.ca: Still not too bad on the modelling front even if you ran out of time. The sky could use a little work. ===== From enrique.sahagun@uam.es: Modelling is not very good but lightning is actually great. ===== From glenn@mccarters.net: The focal blur is nice, but makes the image seem like a small scale = model. In a bright outdoor daylight scene like this, a small camera = aperature would be used, leading to larger depth-of-field. Good = attention to detail in key areas. I'd like to see some more = sophisticated textures indicating more dirt, wear, age. ===== From 25ct@lineone.net: This looks very model-like to me. Maybe some hills in the background might help with this. Good modeling though. ===== From file: This is HOT! ===== From file: This is HOT Notable for lighting, textures, modelling, originality, composition