===== From tek@evilsuperbrain.com: Nice idea, could use more work on the materials/shading and background (there's grass everywhere). ===== From zekaric@yahoo.ca: (To take with a grain of salt, I'm no pro.) Horison is not that interesting. Sky is ok. Houses are visibly repeated and aren't all that interesting. The foreground floor is very different than the rest of scene and makes it more of a focus than anything else. The columns are darker than the shadows. Maybe too much ambient. I like the idea though. One that wasn't used too much. ===== From hobbes-kuscheltiger@gmx.at: Looks good, the camera should not cut off the top of hermes' head though. ===== From p.gibellini@teinos.com: Houses of the village are very nice. Improving the texture of the floor could better the (already nice) image. ===== From glenn@mccarters.net: I am guessing that you chose to illustrate this point of view in order = to highlight Hermes' feet? If so, the lighting and scene arrangement is = working against you -- I had to read the text file before realizing = there were wings on the feet. This hurts your artistic score. A few = subtle changes to the positions of the sun, the floor, the pillars, and = some focal blur would help a lot. The idea is to highlight the wings, = not bury them. Quite a good concept, but your artistic score suffers because of this. ===== From file: The idea is great and the whole scene looks really good. The only noticeable problem is that some of his clothes overlap. Other than that, it's quite good. The angle is interesting and all in all it's my favorite. Notable for composition, originality, lighting