===== From helene.dumur@free.fr: a little bit too dark perhaps, but a good picture.. ===== From povuser@gmail.com: Your idea and image is good. Maybe if you added a better feeling of oldness, i. e. seriously rotted wood, it would have been better ===== From pbjunk@wowway.com: Looks great, love the concept and composition. The lighting would look better is it was cleaned up a little. I'm assuming that the spotlight is sunlight spilling through a hole or window in the wall? A mask on the shape to make it square would help out on realism. Some of the shadows also seem sharp for what you would expect of a scene that depends on global illumination for the majority of light. ===== From s.day@uel.ac.uk: Nice modelling on the bike, I like the ripped saddle. The textures on the bike are fairly good but some of the others don't seem to match the scene, I think the pieces of wood and paint tins on the floor look too clean to have been sitting there as long as the bike. The spider web is very good.. ===== From file: Pretty, and with lots of intersting modelling and texturing, but it is almost too dim. Nice bicycle. ===== From file: Notable for lighting ===== From file: Notable for lighting, originality, textures, modelling, composition