===== From vansickl@erols.com: The camera motion was unnatural throughout most of the animation, and the motion of the car even more so. vansickl@erols.com ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: Reasonable interpretation of theme. I'm not sure how to comment. The rain looks cool, the snow only half real. The movement of the can is totally unrealistic. The introduction and end are very good. ===== From cdsi26@bupers.navy.mil: I idea of showing the decay of a wall strikes me as very original. When that wall was put up I'm sure the workers stood back and decided it would be there, unchanged, forever. Only negative remark. Camera movement...needs a little more control. I nearly got motion sickness from all the weaving and rushing in and out. Other than that a very good anim. ===== From robertsc@accn.org: Scene changes and camera speed were a little hard on the eyes. ===== From file: The fly-by's are confusing and distracting. Various cuts and fades would've been more effective. ===== From file: Excellent lighting. Sometimes the camera seems a little jerky, but an excellent animation. Notable for lighting, originality