===== From simonk@australiamail.com: Nice use of dragons. Especially liked their flying sequence. ===== From gsingelm@t-online.de: the flight of the dragons (including movement of camera) is quite well done ===== From pterandon@yahoo.com: Only flaw is that dragon's texture appears to be exactly same as that of stone, which is a bit odd. Very high score. ===== From zach@brewstergeisz.cjb.net: You certainly told a story. You already know about the interpenetration in the dragons' "hug" at the end, so I'll instead bring up one technical point. Fly cycles are notoriously difficult to do well, and I think you made a good shot at it, but remember that a) the wings move horizontally as well as vertically, and b) the downswipe is much quicker than the upswipe. Think of it as swimming through air. ===== From lou_bruce@yahoo.com: Very impressive. The dragon modeling was very good. A little more texture would help. The animation of the flying was excellent, very believable. I loved your choice of camera angles and moves. The sky was especailly beautiful. The ending was a little too simple but I understand there's only so much you can fit into 5 MB. ===== From r@mediacenterc.wustl.edu: Beautiful dragons. Great storyline. Many technical problems - the wings intersected with each other on the downbeats. The entwining necks cut into each other. The story line was great, though. Notable for originality, composition