===== From maal-irtc20030115@anthrosphinx.de: Motion of the camera is a bit bumpy sometimes. ===== From Martin.Magnusson.7121@student.uu.se: I like the opening scene, where the different cars are presented. It has a sort of a flashy TV sports show feel to it. The amount of focal blur in one of the scenes makes it look like a miniature race. With a real camera, you wouldn't get that kind of blur unless the camera was really close to the subject. Also, you can see the tiles of grass quite clearly. A procedural texture, or a larger image map, would probably look better. ===== From maarten_hofman@hotmail.com: I miss the smoke and the dust coming from the back of the cars, this would've made a great difference in their apparant speed. The motion is fluid, though, and I like the way the flag in the end signals the winner. ===== From steven.place@lucidapple.com: I have to give you credit for technical and your originality. Alot of car scenes came up, and i liked yours because it was a true race. I deff would have liked to see a more real sky/background/road texture. Putting that aside, I did enjoy seeing that there was a start, middle(action), and end to the scene. It tied everything together. I would have liked to see more of a ferrari presence in the scene, but I understood what you were trying to get accross. Very cool. ===== From glenn@mccarters.net: I liked everything except the wheels -- something is wrong with them. Fine car movements, but some of the camera movements seemed jerky. Wish the environment did not have a plain flat horizon. A nice little tribute to Ferrari. ===== From clem@dhol.org: Very good feeling of speed, especially at the end. I liked the camera angles and the checkered flag overlay at the end. Might have been better with engine and crowd sounds instead of the music. ===== From suso@suso.org: This almost looks like a claymation to me. I think you need to slow the car movement down or increase the frame rate so that the motion is more fluid. Also, the cars alignment when they go around one of the 1st corners is off. The music is somewhat distracting and unnecessary. The modeling is ok though.