===== From roth@ens.ascom.ch: Too bad the atmosphere didn't work. Would have made quite a difference. ===== From djconnel@flash.net: A nice scene with the foreground, lighthouse, and background providing nice depth. The statue on the roof is a nice touch. However, texturing needs real improvement and the lighting is not realistically done.... the stars, for example, should not be brighter through the light cone. The moon needs some work as well.... an image map of the real moon would help. The water also could use some added work. Dan ===== From castlewrks@aol.com: Interesting image... setting could use some work. More detail. ===== From agage@mines.edu: Coloring and textures are very flat. ===== From sonya_roberts@geocities.com: Good concept. Nice followthrough, though I'm a little confused as to what the object over at the right of the image is supposed to be - the front of a ship? Harbour area could have used a little more detailing, perhaps. ===== From chipr@niestu.com: Good modeling and composition. Texturing could use some work--most things are a bit too smooth. Nice concept. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Good scene idea. "Ambient" seems to be too high, especially on parts of the boat. ===== From ethelm@bigfoot.com: Good idea, interesting image. Did they use plastic to make ships in those days? ===== From bsieker@techfak.uni-bielefeld.de: Most of the scene is just dark and boring. Somehow the composition fails to attract the eye. Partly due to lack of detail and also due to lack of interesting lighting and camera angle. ===== From lpurple@netcom.com: Image is too dark (needs gama correction); once that is done, scene is well modelled and looks great. ===== From r@cust160.webbernet.net>: Interesting design. The post in the foreground intrudes. The light seems to be shining inland. The brass? mirror is good.