===== From rexx@sci.fi: HAHAHAHAHAH! The expression on the man's face is just hilarious! ===== From nijman@nmtrix.com: Goed idee, goeie opbouw en belichting, je ziet de textures zichzelf herhalen. Ik hoop dat je alle modellen zelf gebouwd hebt. ===== From gregj56590@aol.com: Poor contrast and/or lighting. ===== From ct@westmarch.com: If this one one doesn'n win i'll be surprised ===== From johnson@pharmacy.arizona.edu: Very good! One of the very best this round The fog, while properly even, just seems to wash things out. The other distraction is the repeating pattern in the bricks. Since it forms the mass of the picture, the repeating pattern really jumps out. Needs a few more pieces of trash here and there, that beer can looks lonely, and the lamp needs a base, down by the sidewalk. More posters, maybe half torn off, and overlapping, would mask the pattern in the bricks and added to the seedy back street look. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: This image seems to have a faded / washed-out look. ===== From clem@dhol.com: Clever. Very nice modelling. Too foggy. The briefcase is a bit too rounded. It makes me think of a baseball umpire's chest protector. The bricks need a bit of relief. The poses and features are very expressive. This is a little hard to expain, but it loses something on concept because the skeletons come across as something just thrown in to be strange, rather than as a strange but organic part of the scene. Compare Anto's dragon. A dragon in a subway is odd, but he fits in the scene. He seems to belong there. He is doing something and (trying) to interact with his surroundings. These skeletons, on the other hand don't really belong where they are (why are they so small, why hold their dance on this random sidewalk?). They could and should be doing their dance in a place on their scale, with festive (in undead terms) surroundings. As it is they give a slight smell of being contrived just to fit the topic. Any other odd thing or creature would have done as well, whereas the aforementioned dragon is essential to the story of that scene. This isn't a bad image by any means. I like it a lot. But the concept is almost but not quite there. ===== From martialrameaux@multimania.com: Good atmosphere! I dont know why, but I think to a Mac Orlan's song ! Good dream ! :-) ===== From sdevet@istar.ca: Very nice! The modelling in Rhino is well done. I don't know how much of the figure work is yours, and how much was premade, so it's hard to judge. The sign on the wall looks very realistic, but the wall itself seems a bit too repetitive. Great expression on Mr B's face! ===== From peter@table76.demon.co.uk: I was going to suggest more detail on the wall (a window, perhaps) but that would draw attention away from the subject. So I don't think I have any useful suggestions, except maybe move the camera closer to the subject. ===== From file: Well done. The man's expression is amusing. ===== From file: Incredible modeling, the lighting is great, and the idea is one of the best in the competition.