===== From PsycoDeadMan@innocent.com: I dunno, maybe it's just me, but doesn't white light usualy spread? ===== From uwezi@geocities.com: The lenses are great, the sailing ship is great... the ship on the beach is not... I think the texture and structure of the wall, the beach and the grass need some more work ===== From jabeck@bellsouth.net: Nice job for only your second ever full scene. I think the texturing could use a little work, and maybe the scaling too. ===== From archangel@wxs.nl: I really like the sea, the clouds and the lighthouse, but the beach looks more like the pyramids of Gizeh... Also the grass just suddenly changes into sand, rather than fading into eachother... But as it is your second image, you can be quite statisfied with it... ===== From tglover@nettally.com: Good concept -- nice layout. You're rght - textures need work -- they're always a real bear to get right! Hang in there! Good start. ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: The shore is way too bright. I know, you tell me artistic licence, but ! The paint on the light house is brilliant. The light cone does not look good to me. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Good work. I'm glad you included boats in the image, but they look like toy sailboats. Unusual swirly texture on the tower. ===== From clem@dhol.com: Good texture on the lighthouse. The water isn't bad either. The beam is good, but not quite right. I like the wake around the sailboat, although more detailed boats and some texture in the grass and sand would have helped a lot. ===== From peter@table76.demon.co.uk: The boat on the beach looks strangely flattened.