===== From uwezi@geocities.com: the trees seem to be too similar - a slight variation in height and diameter would have been nice. Perhaps also a smoother transition from spherical to conical trees - not a straight line. ===== From sammy@cube.net: I gave you an extra point in concept, as you had *two* lighthouses;) ===== From tglover@nettally.com: Not bad - but layout seems somehow stiff and rigid -- all lines are up and down or right and left. Nice trick with the trees and bushes -- works real well in middle and distance. More shadows would probably help pic. Try angle lighting to add some shadows. ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: Sorry, I'm tired for comments. An average submission. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: The white sky looks like a nuclear explosion! ===== From mark.wagner17@gte.net: The scene is over-illuminated. Try getting rid of some of the lights and reducing the ambient light to create some shadows. ===== From clem@dhol.com: Interesting image. Foliage is pretty, if a bit unrealistic. Placement of lighthouses in image is too symmetric. Foreground badly needs more modelled detail and more detailed textures.