===== From uwezi@geocities.com: the moonscape is too green, the helmet needs some work... ===== From jake@snafu.de: The suit looks like it's made of clay, but otherwise good pic. ===== From rbenjam2@tampabay.rr.com: I think that the moon's surface needs more craters and the space suit, since it is in the foreground, needs more detail. The stars are smeared by the anti-aliasing. You can eliminate that by putting a high ambient value on the finish fo the stars. ===== From curtis_cooper@hotmail.com: Astronaut looks like a marshmellow, he's missing a neck. ===== From tglover@nettally.com: Good concept -- definitely within theme. Good placement of picture elements. Lunar surface not pitted enough, especially in view in visor. And shouldn't there be spherical distortion in the image in the visor? Spacesuit material seems organically lumpy. Weird texture -- intentional? Almost seems like a rough statue of a space person. Somehow shadows don't seem consistent, either. ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: I like the astronaut's scaphandre, lots of style there. The moon's ground does not look right. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: The earth and the flag look good. The astronaut could use some more detail. ===== From clem@dhol.com: Reflecting the landmark is a good idea. Astronaut is a good try but really needs to be more realistic. Stars need a bit of work. Promising image, somewhat flawed execution.