===== From grimmg@hotmail.com: hte ground is too flat, and there are no impact of asteroids. I like the way you did the aluminium on the vehicule (but not enough futurist !) ===== From uwezi@geocities.com: the heightfield is too visible in the foreground great family picture !!! ===== From scarmig@ohmss.com: Good job all around! The only complaint I have as the fractilization of the landscape as it gets near the camera. I would have liked to have seen the puffs of dust from all the movement as well as foot prints and such. ===== From curtis_cooper@hotmail.com: Space seems very black, not a single star. ===== From tglover@nettally.com: Love the kid straying from the trail! Moon surface great at distance, but tessilates in the foreground. Good texture on it, tho. Foil is pretty good, but needs smaller crinkles - try scaling by about 1/10 . Good lighting, but maybe crop left 1/4 of pic - more interesting? ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: Very good interpretation of the topic. The moon's surface could be nicer though. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Clever idea, and well-done modelling on everything except the lunar surface. Its triangular pattern in the foreground is distracting. The gold foil on the lander is quite good. ===== From clem@dhol.com: Terrible polygonal artifacts on the ground. Lander texture does need work. Good layout. Needs footprints.