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From cdsi26@bupers.navy.mil:
The most notable thing about this scene...lighting.  I know it took up a lot of processing power but the effect is worth it.  Maybe more erosion on the other objects in the scene to match that of the statues.

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From ameede@madmac.com:
The first impression I got was the amount of light shinning on the scene.  I have actually experienced this type of bright light at night but only during a full moon and after a snow storm has dumped its load of snow.  The ground appears to have snow but the remaining objects in the scene do not indicate any prescence of snow.  Because of this it feels incomplete for me. From reading your description your concerns were for formalistic and technical concerns.  This you have done well with.  I do perceive that the doorway where the red eyes are located appears flat.

ameede@madmac.com

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From dwallace@lynx.dac.neu.edu:
Good idea, but the scene is too sparse.  More graves needed.

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From tina@ripco.com:
I'm impressed by the windows and the lighting. The crypt, I'm afraid, doesn't 
look realistic at all; it looks like a frosted cake. The archway/height of it 
looks squished when given the foreground markers to measure against. I think 
this scene could have been improved by a few touches of color, or at least 
the use of some darker shades of grey.

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From ericf@foothill.net:
I liked the concept, fear of dark places and graveyards being a time-honored tradition.  But I would have liked to have seen more details, flesh out, so to speak, the scene.  I think the 'eyes' might have been made a little subtler, as well, as they seemed to dominate a wee bit too much.



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From gmccarter@hotmail.com:
I can appreciate the difficulty of lighting a scene like this.  Good use of heightfields.
Something about the shadows and textures in the triangular area of the roof bothers me.  Maybe the scene needs radiosity.  Interesting shadows cast on the ground by the fancy windows.

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From mark.wagner17@gte.net:
Moonlit scenes are much bluer than this.

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From sjlen@ndirect.co.uk:
This is very well modelled, you can see that something's happening there.
Only problem is that the textures are terrible.  The doorway looks like a fire place.  The sand/dust on the ground looks good, again it's just that there's no texture.  The ceiling could be a lot more interesting. The lighting is good.


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From file:
Perhaps you should try again after you have learned something about composition.
Notable for composition