===== From cdsi26@bupers.navy.mil: I can relate. Very realistic depiction of why developers get paid so much :) ===== From timk@jtse.com: Good concept. Excelent technical execution--no pun intended. But there should be more blood. It should be spattered on the keyboard and the computer screen, as the developer uses his last ounce of strength to type "Just can't take any more" on the computer. Okay, so maybe these are creative decisions. But the image as stands lacks that sense of horror that it might have. Though the concept and technique excel, the scene is just average. ===== From ameede@madmac.com: The layout of the objects in the scene are well placed. Everything looks so clean, it appears that the computer operator dusted and polished before committing suicide. There needs to be some kind of reflected light within the small bookshelf next to the drawers of the desk. It was also difficult for me to distinguish the blade of the knife from the sheet of paper. I like the artwork, again your placement of objects helps the viewer read the artwork from left to right and from foreground to background to a circular motion that ends with the last object which is the knife and the note underneath the blade. Also, the lighting you did apply suggests to me earlier morning hours. So, the artwork for me was successful, I just don't see my desk like that even as I am sitting here in the dark at 4 am. ameede@madmac.com ===== From patrickd@netins.net: Hard to agree with on the one since the deadline was longer than any other submission ===== From jrcsurvey@aol.com: A very nice balance of color and a sense of random though not chaotic arrangement of objects This made me laugh, but you know I think a programmer would have finished the coffee first. ===== From tina@ripco.com: No, no, no. Direct your despair OUTWARD, not INWARD. :) The knife and note and many of the little touches on the desk are nice. Is that a javascript error on your screen? Reminds me of one (I get them all the time at work, on my woefully unstable machine). The wood is a little odd, and there's something a little strange about the keyboard, too. ===== From ericf@foothill.net: Another image in a more humorous vein (or is that artery?) I like this one, it reminds me of the whining I do as deadlines for this competition approach, and I am running out of energy to anything more. The details are nice, the blood spattered cup, the books above and below, nice composition generally. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: I like the image on the calendar. ===== From sjlen@ndirect.co.uk: This doesn't really say horror to me. Many items that you have in the scene can't be seen all that well. The desk looks good. ===== From file: There is something wrong with the curving of the sword. Trust me, I've seen (and handled) many japanese wapons. ===== From file: Nice attention to details. eg the pencils, mug, books etc. Notable for composition ===== From file: how many times i've considered doing this after getting one of those messages! good texturing, but if you'd given the blade a shiny metallic texture and not had the pencils standing straight up and down it would've looked more realistic. good job though! Notable for originality, textures