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From cdsi26@bupers.navy.mil:
This is very dark.  I understand what you are trying to portray and I can make out some of it.  Even when I adjust the brightness of my monitor it doesn't help...sorry.

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From timk@jtse.com:
Very poor contrast. I can't see anything there. Where's the action? The
character? There's nothing here that grabs and holds my attention.

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From jcheves@ix.netcom.com:
Add some light, or adjust your gamma before submitting

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From mark_poole2000@yahoo.com:
Image was too dark to see what was going on.

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From robertsc@accn.org:

Scene was very dark. I could not see much detail at all.
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From jrcsurvey@aol.com:
Is that the ghost of Picasso?

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From tina@ripco.com:
I like the wall sconces and the basic idea. The dimensions on this picture are
extremely bizarre, however. I know from experience that modelling cigarette 
smoke can be difficult but it's definitely too yellow; the scene in general 
is a bit too yellow/brown, which may be why.

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From rbenjam2@tampabay.rr.com:
The lighting doesn't really work here.  It's much too difficult to make out the ghost.

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From gmccarter@hotmail.com:
Everything seems to be slightly ill-proportioned, as if it was a small model carved out of wood.  The result is slightly chaotic: a window less than two bricks wide; a clock nearly the same size as a doorway; a pack of cigarettes as big as a head.  Interesting effects.

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From mark.wagner17@gte.net:
The ghost blends in with the background too well

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From sjlen@ndirect.co.uk:
It's too dark.