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From cdsi26@bupers.navy.mil:
If I had those tools i'd make people too.  Not a bad scene but a couple of things bothered me.  1. No expression on the womans face.  She should be terrified.  2. the man looks like he is ready to do a triple-axle.  Again this is not a bad scene but with a little more detail it would have been better.

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From daffyduckx@hotmail.com:
The expression and hair on the woman are good. One of the biggest difficulties
with modeling a face is creating an expression that looks natural. Most faces
look stiff and hard. But this one is nice.

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From timk@jtse.com:
The character poses could be improved. The woman doesn't look particularly
scared. For all we know, she could be out for an afternoon walk, completely
unaware that she is being followed. Both figures should be tilted farther
forward, with their arms close to their sides.

Poor development of setting: Some silhouettes, or at least some shapes, in the
background may have made it clearer that a mob was chasing her. Dimmer primary
light with a blue tinge would make it clear that it's at night, or at least in
late evening, and would have provided greater contrast.

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From jrcsurvey@aol.com:
Thing is, she looks like a strong capable woman, or even a witch, but not a 
terrified victim.  I like the approach of using a fully realized figure to 
interpret the topic, but it is a demanding one.

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From dlauer@optonline.net:
I want my MTV. 

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From dwallace@lynx.dac.neu.edu:
A tree with a noose hanging from it in the background would have helped.

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From tina@ripco.com:
The poses are rather stiff and unnatural. The rain obscures the details of
the background.

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From gmccarter@hotmail.com:
The poses somehow seem like just that: a pose, rather than part of a fluid running motion.
The way her leg pokes through the dress -- intentional or mistake?
Good concept, but I wish more of the other people were visible.  Good hair, textures, color scheme.  Strong artistry/drama.

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From sjlen@ndirect.co.uk:
I really like the look of this, but think that a more modern setting like a 
city street and the man carrying a meat cleaver would have been better.
The rain only seems to be falling behind the characters, the woman's breasts
are a bit too big for her body, but I wouldn't complain if she was real.  
The colours that you've chosen to use really work well and set the 
atmosphere.