===== From bobfranke@halcyon.com: The note is very good, except for the shadow on the water and sky. Add "no_shadow" to the note object or add "finish {ambient 1 diffuse 0}" to the textures for the sky and water to remove the shadow. ===== From whhale@nvl.army.mil: Couldnt give you high scores because the details were missing. I really like the concept though. ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: Nice concept... the cliff and sand lack realism ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: A pity the cliff texture does not look right at all : it does not mtach the rest. The pinned up to do list is a good idea and well done. ===== From jouni@mikrobitti.fi: All right! The todo list was an excellent addition to the scene. I wish you had had more time to work on the beach. The sand near the water looks the same as sand elsewhere, which is of course not the case if you go to a real beach. The beach is also fairly flat, while usually the sand forms small and frequent "mini-dunes". The footsteps are pretty far apart from one another in the width direction, compared to their short distances in the walking direction. Did the castlebuilder leave with his bladder full? ;-) ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: I like the way the to-do list looks, and it adds a certain sense of surrealness to the whole scene. I would have preferred a different color/texture on the sand, though, especially since it is such a big part of the scene. ===== From sjlen@ndirect.co.uk: Some of these textures need serious work, like the sand and the water.