===== From loomsbury@yahoo.com: I kind of like this idea. Texturing could use work, and more detail is in order I think. Other than that, it looks ok. ===== From tony@j4tb.com: A nice rendering except what you said. No garbage or traffic or people. ===== From whhale@nvl.army.mil: Kind of grainy and too clean. Love the concept. ===== From Stickgod01@aol.com: Good idea, but unfortunately, the shantytown does look far too clean and orderly. Before I read the text file, I did not realize that's what it was. ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: Nice concept. The textures and lighting might have been better. ===== From mwsny001@mweb.co.za: Ho, fellow South African! :) Very nice image! ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: This scene has a nice washed-out look to it, and the street looks good. The marble on the building could use some fine-tuning, as well as the smudges/staining on the corrugated buildings. ===== From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au: Quite a nice image, with some good details. The corrugated iron works well, but the texturing could use a little refinement - though it's on the right track. The composition is good - definitely conveys the sense of the city. This really just needs more detailed texturing... dirt, rubbish on the road, and maybe a car or person somewhere. ===== From file: As you already noticed, it is to clean out there .