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From loomsbury@yahoo.com:
Can you say... "Craaaaap!!!"?  The explosions are a little too spherically
flat(a term I just made up now) don't you think?  I like the ants, they look
pretty good, however, they could use some texturing... maybe some hair?  And
those ants in the farm... are they retarded?  can't they build any more tunnels
than that?  Nice work though, I like the idea.
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From jaime@ctav.es:
Very nice, Travis. But, why not used antialiasing?

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From scarmig@ohmss.com:
I really like the crayon drawing the best, good job modelling crumpled paper! 
You have some good ideas building with your wallpaper, buildings, and ants,
just nned to start improving textures.  Also you might try rendering using
anti-aliasing as your crayons in particlar are showing their pixels!

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From tony@j4tb.com:
I love the escaped ants that brought your Artistic rating up a lot. Your ant
farm is realistic as is the kids drawing. The desk could use more texture and a
little different angle to make it look more 3d. The buildings would look better
if there were more, perhaps in the background.

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From whhale@nvl.army.mil:
Should have used more anti aliasing

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From marlo.steed@uleth.ca:

Nice concept.  The rendering is a bit stair stepped.... 
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From StephenF@whoever.com:
Cute concept, especially including ants from a fiftie's 
monster movie.  The ant farm looks good, as does the 
crayon drawing.  And the signature carved into the table 
is a nice touch.

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From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au:
This is a nice idea, and some elements of the image are great - the crayon
drawing adds a brilliant touch. Your modelling skills will improve. The wood
grain on the windowsill should be horizontal (along the length of the wood)
rather than vertical, and your explosions need some work. I can't tell if
they are media or just textured spheres... playing with media will generate
much more realistic explosions.


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From file:
Nice idea, I'm shure, someday you will make really great pics.