===== From loomsbury@yahoo.com: This looks pretty good. Why are all of the pieces of paper airborne at the same time? I like the texture on the wall and sidewalk, but the street needs something. ===== From tony@j4tb.com: The objects in this scene look very good and natural. The porch lighting is among the most realistic I've seen. One thing that would really improve this image is a little phong on the car and maybe a glossier finish. ===== From whhale@nvl.army.mil: I did have to adjust the brightness to get the details. I like the feel of this. ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: Very naturalistic look to it. The lighting was not quite right... for instance, the car is in total darkness... seems inconsistent. ===== From mwsny001@mweb.co.za: Very realistic image. I love the wind effect on the papers. ===== From tglover@nettally.com: II like the lighting - thanks for the verbal description of the correct gamma - made a world of difference! ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Nice scene... I like the tires stacked in the corner. Nice graffiti too. The texture on the trash bags could use some work, I think. ===== From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au: Nice, dismal... captures the essence of the city. Effective and moody lighting, with good modelling and texturing. The only thing I'd complain about is the papers - they look too clean and white. Some newsprint and dirt on them would be great. Otherwise, superb. ===== From file: i do like the flapping papers, and the scene placement is very simplistic and appealing. the only comment i have is to turn down the ambiance on the car, it is distracting to the eye and creates a 'cartooney' feel. other than that, it is a very good compisition.