===== From rjhansen@hotbot.com: Nice peaceful scene. ===== From tony@j4tb.com: Wow! What a great team effort. It sounds like both of you put a lot of work into the drawing. It is very nice. Incredible attention to detail right down to the ripples of the fish in the water. ===== From warp@iki.fi: The sky looks quite good, but the rest of the scene is pretty dark. Could be better illuminated. Sensation of darkness is usually better achieved with high contrast (very dark shadows) than with an overall dim image. The water could have some low waves. It just looks too still to look real. ===== From dmacisaacj@hotmail.com: almost looks 16 color or cartoonish, but good concept ===== From mark.wagner17@gte.net: You might want to make the highlight on the water smaller. Also, the sun is too high in the sky for the colors of the sky. Other than these minor problems, however, this image is very good. ===== From chris_hormann@gmx.de: I really like that scene, good example for a joint venture work Only foreground seems a bit empty, maybe you should just try to vary the texture ===== From jouni@mikrobitti.fi: The scene is lovely and the elements are well composed. You two still need to practice your skills in rendering and texturing, but having seen your previous joint entry I must say you're showing true development. Keep it up! To be candid, the water and the beach are the worst problems in your image. Such a mirror surface doesn't really exist, and the ground could've used some real bumps - the texture makes me expect it. The deer and the mountains could use some finishing too. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Very pretty... this really captures the sense of tranquility the artists were goind for, and the sky looks nice. The foremost lake looks a little glassy, though, and some of the details could have been brought out more (the deer and the cabin in particular). ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Nice work. I like the sky, deer, rocks. A lot of your hard work, however, is not seen in the final image (such as the stone pathway). Small flaws: the mountain tops are a little spiky, and the water seems to be unnaturally mirrorlike.