===== From bfranke2@home.com: Try adding a more creative texture to the cliff. Maybe some scattered grass or moss. The image is a good start, it just needs a bigger investment of time. ===== From darce@southwest.com.au: Gamma? ===== From tony@j4tb.com: Your Seagull and Rocks look great your water looks more like a mist. ===== From javaearl@hotmail.com: Good cliffs, but not so great sea. Interesting gull; wings appear to be flapping. ===== From warp@iki.fi: The motion blur looks irrealistic. Real cameras do not capture motion blur like that. The landscape is a bit too dark and flat-looking. Sea? Which sea? ===== From chris_hormann@gmx.de: Not bad for a quick creation, Terrain structure looks good, needs some more work :-) ===== From albiaprime@aol.com: Artistic - excellent texturing of cliff face and plateau Technical - nice try on the waves and the bird for someone who says they have not much experience and is not using Pro tools, which makes this effort all the more admirable. Concept - definitely a wilderness