===== From tony@j4tb.com: Great wall texture. 2 suggestions make your bunsen burner flame brighter and your tube should be have softer bends. ===== From elvish_archer@mailcity.com: I think the main problems is no life in the lab ===== From sammy@cube.net: The flame of the burner is a little bland. otherwise nice first entry! ===== From stephenhasmail@yahoo.com: Pretty good modelling. A pretty simple scene, but I'd say it turned out fairly well. It sounds like you used a lot of light sources in this scene. I you wanted to speed up your render time, I think you should have cut some of those out instead of cutting procedural textures (I don't know if that even speeds things). I can only really see the effects of the main spot light and the light casting shadows on the right wall. The rest could have been cut, possibly. ===== From whhale@nvl.army.mil: A bit dark for an actual lab environment. ===== From marlo.steed@home.com: Nice image... perhaps could have used some boiling action in the flask. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Very nice for a first entry. The bunsen burner and the pipe look good. The flame could use a little work, though, and the flaring top of the testtubes seems rather wide. The lighting works well to give it a more interesting mood. ===== From tom@tomandlu.co.uk: Some nice things, but, as a scene, doesn't really work for me. Flame needs turbulence. ===== From albiaprime@aol.com: A nice first effort, looking forward to your next.