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From kingofmycastle@gmx.net:
The battle is over, nothing is won.

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From tek@evilsuperbrain.com:
Pretty impressive for a first entry. Keep it up!

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From tony@awmcs.net:
An excellent first time entry!

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From extrememarinerfan@home.com:
The amount of fog detracts from the image. Also, the gate doesnt really look
like a gate . . .

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From ZenPsycho@yahoo.com:
Very good composition, and an imaginative back story. I'm one of those people
that dislikes stock models.. but I think you make up for that by arranging them
well. the grass is repetitive though, you can see stripes through it.. I
wouldn't expect moss to group together into huge blotches like that on a
vertical face.. it'd be more likely to go between the bricks... the cannons are
fairly good.. the castle itself is pretty standard...  but good work on the
composition! I suggest taking a closer look at actual stone walls with moss
though. 

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From mark.wagner17@gte.net:
Try randomizing the grass positions.  Right now it forms 
straight rows that look very artificial.

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From peter@table76.demon.co.uk:
I like the CSG castle.

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From delfeld@mailcity.com:
A fortress is not an object that resembles a castle. . . they may be two
different ideas.  

As a matter of fact, the notion of fortress _does_ come across. . . it is the
skeleton:  our fortress of life will meet an inevitable end.