===== From nitro_glis@yahoo.com: I love this image! very expressive! ===== From philip.chan@home.com: Excellent work! The models look very realistic. The rain an the splash at Goliath's foot are also nice additions to the image. ===== From lrwii@joplin.com: The boy is facing the wrong way. They are both on the same plane it makes them look like statues. The background and rain are good. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Nice work on the figures and the ground. Rain looks good too. The way the figures are positioned, it looks to me as if David is fleeing from Goliath, which I don't think is what the artist intended (bases on the text file). This undermines the intended concept of the scene quite a bit. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: The splash and rainy atmosphere are really well done. Good characterizations, but why is David facing away from Goliath? Is it coincidence that both have nearly the same pose? Modeling is excellent on Goliath, but David has a funny face and shoulders. I like most of the textures, except for the rim of the big shield. Image is a little "flat" lacking strong contrasts or shadows. ===== From tm-ray@consistent.org: Goliath's shins and arm muscles look very good. Why isn't his sword drawn, and why is David facing away from him? David's expression is a bit odd. The plants are good; it looks like Goliath is normal-sized and David is tiny, which may or may not have been the effect you wanted. ===== From r@client121041.atl.attbroadband.com: Notable for originality, modelling, textures