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From nitro_glis@yahoo.com:
the composition is just a little dry I think, but nice work for the time!

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From philip.chan@home.com:
The dust look really good.  The toad look little blocky, but I like the way you
positioned the one in the foreground.  The red glows coming from the toads
could use some work.  Landscape in the background as opposed to "an endless
plain" would have been a nice addition.  



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From lrwii@joplin.com:
Not enough contrast between the hand reaching out and 
the body. It took me forever to figure out just what you 
where trying to do.

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From gmccarter@hotmail.com:
Sorry, I cannot understand either the image or the text file.  I think the 
main problem may be the lighting -- the main light seems to be right near 
the camera, throwing confusing shadows all over the green guy.
The three other green guys seem to be tiny fireflies just off the main guy's 
shoulder; otherwise they would be heavily blurred like the rest of the 
background.


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From tm-ray@consistent.org:
The toad shape just doesn't do it for me.