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From jouni@mikrobitti.fi:
Even with your background story, the topic connection is vague. I like your
background though.
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From ruy@hipernet.com.br:
This same picture could be used for the Fantasy round, but here it seems utterly
out of context. Without your text, it would be impossible to link the picture
with the topic.

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From marlo.steed@uleth.ca:
Nice concept but the textures needed work... the water did not look like water.

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From emediez@emediez.com:
Interesting concept. Maybe more flexible sails would add 
more movement to the scene.

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From lrwii@joplin.com:
I like the concept and the overall compositon. The hole 
in the funnel of clouds look pasted on.

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From chris_hormann@gmx.de:
I don't see the connection to the topic, maybe you should have elaborated more
on the story.  Some more work on modeling and realistic lighting would have
been good too.  The water looks fairly nice.