===== From fmurr@free.fr: You would have moved back your camera view to avoid the cutting of the temple. ===== From jouni@mikrobitti.fi: A very good first entry there! Nice modeling with the temple. The fog-type element covers the lack of background elements, but also swallows a lot of what might've been worth seeing. A couple of more items in the foreground and a bit less dominating fog would've still added a couple of points, but even as it is, I like it very much. Looking forward to your next one! ===== From ruy@hipernet.com.br: Tr_s Beau! ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: Nice detail on the structures. I wonder about your choice of textures... did you research that out (the roof uses a brick?... don't they usually used tiered tile?) ===== From daffy-duck@worldnet.att.net: Very nice job modeling the building. The birds are a nice touch, but it would be nice to see something more in the background. ===== From lrwii@joplin.com: Very good first entry. The birds are a little cluttered and looks like the same bird placed differently. Since the roof is the 'star of the show' it would probably been better to place each tile separately. I know a lot of work but worth it. Maybe I'm a POV purist but I don't see anything that couldn't have done with POV alone. The windows could have used prizms and sphere sweep; the jugs, lathe; the birds since they are simple and in the background cones and spheres scale and position right would have been sufficient. ===== From chris_hormann@gmx.de: Nice atmosphere and good modeling work. I think the contrasts should be higher if the sun is that clearly visible.