===== From trothgard@citywidesoftware.com: The title on the book and the blanket on the side of the bed were a little distracting. I do like the ceiling fan. ===== From cly@u.arizona.edu: I like the lamp/fan on the ceiling. ===== From robbert@mintec.ca: Rock hard bed. Ouch. :) ===== From pokorny@attglobal.net: I like the ceiling fan and the rippled effect in the spotlight. You noted the problems with the blanket yourself. And I found the rest of the image a bit washed out and flat. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: I like this one a lot. While it may leave something to be desired from a technical standpoint, it has a cool look to it that suits the subject matter well. The shape of the blanket looks good on the bed and floor but the hanging part is too straight (although that's probably what was meant by 'could use more work'). Good use of color and lighting to create mood. To me, good texturing is all- important in creating a realistic scene... decent objects (like the ones here) with good textures look better than detailed, complex objects with bad (or even just too simple) textures. For example, the beddding here has a shiny, almost plastic look to it. Try spending an hour or two sometime just adjusting the finish parameters, and I'd recommend adding a very light normal to it as well, to break up the light some. ===== From lrwii@joplin.com: I like your lighting effect. It is hard making cloth using height fields. You should try triangle mesh. Doing so by hand can be tedius, so I use 'Triangles "by David Sharp at (www.geocities.com/Athens/Academy/8764/triangles.ht m) Its a DOS program and a free download.