===== From trothgard@citywidesoftware.com: I liked the interpretation of the theme. The wings seemed a bit off, I think they needed to be a little less transparent. I like the placement of Icarus to the relation of the rest of the picture, although his foot deep in the ground kinda threw mw off. I even liked the birds over the water away in the distance. I also like waves crashing up against the cliff face. And those are some nice clouds. :) ===== From cly@u.arizona.edu: Your clouds do not look as realistic as I expected. I do like the wings. Also, I think the birds should be closer, I would like to see some texture. This is good for originality to compare the wings to those made my the man. The placement of the vegetation is not as great as I expected. Maybe more or mor greenier. Finally, I think you should make your water more caustics. I see huge splashes, but I don't see tides, rushing inward. But, great job. ===== From robbert@mintec.ca: A better figure could have been chosen. It looks badly formed. Feathers look good, maybe looking a little like paper though. Nice thick grass. Except it sort of sticks out as the rest of the bluffs/cliffs are barren. Good waves, the splash against the cliffs seem a little over-exaggerated though. Good work! ===== From pokorny@attglobal.net: Good concept however I found the image a bit incomplete compared to others and some of the scale of objects in the image to be somewhat miss - matched. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: I like the land mass and the wings here. Composition seems rather unbalanced to me... the right side seems too crowded while the left seems too empty. ===== From lrwii@joplin.com: The wings are fare. I Like the sky and sea except where the sea meets the shore.