===== From cly@u.arizona.edu: Great job with the boy, the boat, and the unicorns. I'm not happy with the texture on Spot and the mountains. The left side of the mountains look pixelated. I think more details on the moon would be great. Also, I think that more detail with the bridge would make it better. It looks too plain. Maybe add some hanging rope, and different wood texture to make it stand out. ===== From pokorny@attglobal.net: Screws in there heads... Thousand to one odds you eat meat. :-) Solid image. I think the textures could be better - and is a kids bed ever that neat.... ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: For me, this does a great job of illustrating the childhood experience of dreaming. The composition works well to lead the eye through the scene. All the objects look good, although most could benefit from some additional work. The bed seems overly long to me, although I like the pattern on the bedspread. I wonder if it would be good to somehow blur the border between the bedroom and the dream world? Still, this is an excellent scene, especially given the time constraints mentioned. Looking forward to seeing more scenes from the artist. ===== From file: Whimsical, great interpretation of theme! Lighting, textures do need some work, but the art is there--you can sense the joy at entering this nighttime fantasy world. ===== From r@hmb2-t3-1.mcbone.net: i ever thought that monsters are in a wall closet ?