===== From maarten_hofman@hotmail.com: Could've used more detail, for example in the house. ===== From tyler@cg1.org: Interesting, but the plain is too plain. (Sorry, couldn't resist) ===== From rgow@lanset.com: Heh, I had wanted to put a pump like that in my async_rg entry, but ran out of time. Good job on the trees. ===== From jjaguar@worldnet.att.net: A good first effort. One tip for your skies: try mapping a cloud texture on a transparent horizontal plane instead of the sky sphere itself. That will make the clouds look realistically smaller towards the horizon. The sky sphere should probably only be a gradient that gets lighter near the horizon. ===== From jrcsurvey@aol.com: It has a stark, simple appeal. The lack of texture on the pump is probably do to technical limits but the surprise of it, especially against the dazzling tactility of the trees, gives it a magical presence. ===== From slone@hiwaay.net: The pump needs some texture or surface variation. Nice trees and lighting, but the shadows are unnaturally sharp.