===== From maarten_hofman@hotmail.com: The engine and the propulsion mechanism seem to be rather far apart, and the boat could be more central to the image. ===== From tyler@cg1.org: Farily good modeling job, but the water just doesn't look right. ===== From rgow@lanset.com: This looks like an ocean scene, but the boat appears to be a riverboat. More info in .txt file would be good. ===== From jjaguar@worldnet.att.net: The ship should have more interaction with the water, i.e. a bow wake and more splashing around the steamwheel. ===== From 25ct@lineone.net: The water waves could be smaller? ===== From slone@hiwaay.net: Nice sky. The water seems scaled too big and the smoke doesn't quite seem to be coming from the smokestacks. Nice paddle wheels.