===== From rgow@lanset.com: See previous notes. ===== From maarten_hofman@hotmail.com: Looks the same as the other entry. ===== From tek@evilsuperbrain.com: See my comments on narrowsb. ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: ditto ===== From hildurka@simnet.is: This one was submitted four times, probably by mistake. So I make the same comments for all. This scene is rendered far too small, it is difficult to make out the details, besides there are prominent artifacts, due to jpeg compression. The solution would be to render in higher resolution. The bridge seemes to have a great deal of detail, nice landscapes. The waves on the water are too big and out of proportions with the rest. The sailboat looks good however. I can barely make out the outlines of a ship, why is it so black? According to the outlines it is fairly detailed. The composition is good, you are on the right track.