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From jon@vulpecula.us:
Pretty good image...feels mysterious. Rather empty though.

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From helene.dumur@free.fr:
A very nice wall texture, a good idea. Perhaps this picture needs other things, an other wall, a dead tree..

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From rgow@lanset.com:
This has a very somber moody look, that works well. Add some more objects to go with the house and this could be excellent.

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From thegreatbambeeno@yahoo.com:
Cool, but the background could be a little better

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From hildurka@simnet.is:

A simple scene but showing great potential. I really like it. Keep up your good work!

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From somers@w-link.net:
beautifull art.
Keep working at it.


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From pbrasolin@yahoo.it:
The house is really good, but the desert isn't realistic. (I'm 14 too) PB

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From info@michaelscholz.de:
Not bad, keep going.

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From selsek@fnac.net:
C'est assez vide. Une caméra plus proche du bâtiment 
(qui est bien détaillé) aurait été meilleure. Le sol, le ciel, 
le décor sont assez vides.
Les détails viendront avec l'expérience. C'est un bon 
début.

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From the_dark_allies@hotmail.com:

I like this image a lot.  Only one main element to it, yet, it still stands out and looks good to me.  Keep up the great work, I see you winning a few rounds in the near future at this rate.
 

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From zio_tom78@hotmail.com:
Nice work! Keep learning POV and you'll create great images!

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From p_chan@shaw.ca:
The ground fog works well in creating the mood for the 
scene.  What I find missing is rubble around the house.  
A better sense of ruin could be achieved is there were 
fallen bricks visible around the part of the structure 
which is still standing.

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From glenn@mccarters.net:
Ok, this is a good start.  Good clean image with a nice color harmony.  =
A suggested improvement would be to include more of the sky in the =
composition to balance out the dull bottom parts of the image.  Of =
course, more detail would help too.  Even a small detail such as a =
flying raven would make a good focal point.


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From file:
The base of the ruins... fix it! :) Otherwise nice, but a little too much gray.