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From marlo.steed@uleth.ca:
The concept is a good one.  The camera angle works well.  The details needed
more work.  For instance, the water doesn't look like water.  The wood textures
on the boat needed to be scaled way down.  The face of the serpent needed to
look more serpent like.
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From rgow@lanset.com:
A good idea, and I like the model ship. Lighting could emphasize the monster 
better, as is the sails dominate the image.

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From simplepsy@aol.com:
Great ideas, and use of the software. I feel a more shiney surface would have
been better for the water, and some more detail would have been benificial. 
Unfortunatly many of the objects apear flat. 
Keep it up.  Remember practice makes perfect

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From the_dark_allies@hotmail.com:

Very good concept.  Though if the scene were tweaked some more I think this
could be magnificent.
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From p_chan@shaw.ca:
Texturing for the sea monster is done well.  The ocean 
could use more turbulence (and maybe some splashing) 
effects where the monster breaks the surface.


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From file:
Mmmh. The sails are too straight and too white (it's night). The lights are too
strong. The serpent would seem much more realistic with scales and fins. The
water looks like concrete.