===== From shevlin@uic.edu: There's something off about the lighting in this scene; maybe the illumination from radiosity is too bright. Some of the objects in the foreground could use more interesting textures. ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: The concept is probably appropriate. Hard to put into words but it perhaps it needs more realism. For instance, the beak has no color variation between the outside and inside. ===== From rgow@lanset.com: Good work on the modelling, particularly the railing. Some of the textures seem overbright, high ambient setting maybe? ===== From simplepsy@aol.com: Interesting. I like the ideas, and although I'm not sure what myth this relates to. Some good modeling here, although I can see seams between the arms and the body of the 'god'. ===== From the_dark_allies@hotmail.com: Great colors in this one. Not too sure about the realism of the flying birds though. ===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: Modelling is done fairly well. Adding some ground fog to the scene would probably make the horizon look more natural. ===== From file: Very good architecture and objects. Good composition. A bit crowded. The skin texture refelcts too much. The god's shoulder seems wrong. Notable for composition, modelling