===== From shevlin@uic.edu: This scene looks a little cartoonish, which was probably not the intent. Changing the textures will help to make things seem more real and less plastic. Do the hieroglyphs actually say anything? ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: Nice concept. The image has quite a bit of detail. I think more attention to realistic textures would have helped. ===== From simplepsy@aol.com: All the elements apear to be here. I'm not convinced by the demon... although the whole image does have an egyptian Hyrogliphic look to it. Very plastacine like though... with some better materials and textures this could be much better. ===== From the_dark_allies@hotmail.com: Quite strange. But I like it! ===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: The sky looks good. I find that the fact that the "mortar" is visible in the pyramids makes them seem near and therefore appear small. ===== From skirsch@comcast.net: Interesting concept. The drawing is a bit too simplistic. ===== From file: The human models' simplicity underlines the egyptian feel. Great clouds and lighting. The croco-dog is too smooth or too simple. Notable for composition, modelling, lighting