===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: The concept is good but the image needs more attention to details. For instance, the scrolls needed an aged look. The dragon needed realistic textures, etc. The back parchments have the geometry visible. ===== From rgow@lanset.com: Love the interpretation of topic, great idea. The cylinder containing the fire leaves a noticable shadow. ===== From simplepsy@aol.com: Very funny idea. Comical. Could be technicaly better though. ===== From the_dark_allies@hotmail.com: Nice concept, though some better anti-aliasing and texturing would do wonders for this image. ===== From file: The wall seems to be made of concrete. The paper is too smooth. The flames are not realistic. The dragon is nice but behind the flames which spoils the effect. ===== From file: Notable for originality