===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: This is a nice image. The lighting works well. A bit more of a focus on the game itself would have been useful. .. prhaps a more dramatic camera angle. ===== From rgow@lanset.com: Very good textures, especially the woodgrains. Lighting looks a little odd on the game since I would expect more light from the brightly lit outdoor scene behind it. ===== From jgrimbert@free.fr: What about a beach balloon somewhere on the outside ? The sun is far to near! (shadow...) ===== From fine@head.cfa.harvard.edu: The inside looks great, but the outside doesn't, and that costs this picture a lot. Nitpick: The game pieces are a little too perfectly placed. ===== From jouni@mikrobitti.fi: Perhaps you could've drawn a bit more focus to the game? ===== From bertram.henze@t-online.de: The theme of "beach is more fun than this indoor game" is not supported by outside scenery. Details and effort on the indoor items set the standard, and the beach, the sea and the people fall short of this standard. I would not like to go out there.