===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: The concept is good. However, with so few elements and the fact that they are simple, one really needs to focus on the details and realism. Perhaps attention to lighting - could have made the image come alive. The textures seem to be procedural rather realistic. ===== From tigerhawk@stic.net: I like the idea but the textures and composition of the scene need a little work. There isn't enough contrast and play with light and the wood texture is repetative. Adding more dramatic lighting effects and maybe a shine to the wood, etc. would have gone a long way. ===== From rgow@lanset.com: Looks like you've grasped basic CSG. Congrats on your 1st entry. Try and make the wood texture run lengthwise along the object as it would in the real world. ===== From jgrimbert@free.fr: The wood could be better. The point of view could be better. The environment could be better. ... ===== From jouni@mikrobitti.fi: Well, it looks much like the story in your text file. Scaling the textures and adding some basic finishes would've been an easy way to have some extra eye candy with fairly little effort.