===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: The realism of the background and ground needed some work. Perhaps adding a few lights could have focused on your yoyo. ===== From tigerhawk@stic.net: Would have prefered a longer description (platform, rendering suite, etc.) ===== From rgow@lanset.com: Yoyo is nice. More info in textfile would help. ===== From jgrimbert@free.fr: The wall's texture need more work!