===== From munsonj@onid.orst.edu: Seems to me that their should be a 4th object in the lower right, or the othe three should be centered. I would have applied some texture to the guns as well. ===== From Andreas.Grates@public.uni-hamburg.de: Unmotivated "objects onna plain". Lots of minus. I don't like guns, but that's a personal thing :-). Voting is done by persons *-(. Lighting is way too dark. The shadows are plain odd and create a very unbalanced effect. Talking of unbalanced: All objects are drawn towards upper-left corner! Objects don't seem all to elaborate modelled, especially the bow. Textures are rather more than just a colour. ===== From greentho@bellsouth.net: Art: Simple Tech: under lit. Concept: Simple ===== From file: This image cries out for gamma correction. It is SO dark. With a little bit of tweaking, I can see so much more. I'll assume that the darkness is somehow my fault, and critique the corrected version. The weapons are OK, but the background does not seem at all like a museum, personal or otherwise. At least a case would be nice. They need a scene around them. ===== From file: Too dark.