===== From Andreas.Grates@public.uni-hamburg.de: Too rough floors & ceiling. You should have done something to make the floor look not made of one single wood texture with hexagonned different colours - change orientation of the texture in each hexagon, for example. More light from outside would have been welcome, calling for a bigger window. What the lamps do looks quite good, though. The object count is rather low in the scene, and I'm sorry it looks it. But a nice, average pic overall. ===== From greentho@bellsouth.net: Art: Kind of empty Tech: Pretty straight forward. Nice wall sconces Concept: Need more detail ===== From mickro.warf@laposte.net: good idea but not good finishing ===== From file: Not too bad. The texture on the cieling and walls is a bit too much, and there needs to be some expanation of how there is a pyramid in the floor, but it isn't bad at all. ===== From file: Ceiling and floor overwhem objects.