===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: I liked the use of volumetric lighting. That created a nice mood. The concept worked well. Perhaps adding more of 3D feel to notes would have improved the scence. ===== From dungbeatle@mail.tds.net: Your concept is interesting. Modeling could be better. The lighting is really hurting the picture. Needs better textures. ===== From raytracing@grayproductions.net: Simple but abstract and effective. Nice lighting and textures. ===== From file: Really interesting idea. Contrast is a little low. Notable for originality ===== From file: Nice