===== From rich@brickbots.com: A good start, but I think it needs a bit of refining. There are a lot of little things that could really help make this a nice image. Firstly, I would re-think the composition a little bit. The enclosure of the lighthous and the foreground rocks makes it seems a bit claustrophobic, and the way the edge of the foreground rocks form a tangent with the balcony of the lighthouse really flattens out the composition. Where there should be a foreground (lighthouse), mid-ground (close shoreline) and mid-back (boat) and background there is really only foreground (lighthouse/shoreline) and background (boat/fog). If you pull the camera back to let us see the entire top of the lighthouse, this will probably open up the whole image and solve the tangent with the foreground shore giving the whole think a lot more depth. The modeling is prett good, but the lighting, textures and composition need work. The lighthouse is very close in color to the fog/sky and so does not really stand out, additionally, the whole area we see is in shadow so there is not much contrast to indicated that this is close to us and seperate from the low-contrast background. In contast to this the cliff side is very saturated and creates an imbalance in the piece. It may help to try some different color combinatoins, or just less saturation in generall with an overall hue of orange or red (suggesting sunrise). Less ambient light would really help, or if you are going to use ambient light (as the sky would provide) try multiplying an ambient occlusion pass over the whole thing to give a more nuanced feel in the shadows. Explore using the whole range of luminance in your images. If you take your image into a paint program and turn down the saturation (make it B&W) see how it holds up. If the pattern of light and dark is pleasing, any extra bit of color will just be icing on the cake. ===== From hildurka@simnet.is: Nice landscapes, beautiful setting. Everything looks a bit grainy and the radiosity is too bright in the shadow areas. Would be nicer with more contrast in the light. Apart from that, overall a great image. ===== From dungbeatle@mail.tds.net: Nice picture. Sky seems a little flat. Seems like the ship and the lighthouse don't match. Lighthouse looks too modern for the wooden ship. ===== From simon_smith@zen.co.uk: I like the cliffs and the sky colour. Using the same colour map for the surf was a clever idea - makes the waves 'match' the terrain. ===== From glenn@mccarters.net: Nice refreshing and pleasant image. It does indeed look like morning. = Great "presence" in this image -- I can just about feel the breeze = blowing. I like the details such as the fresnel lenses, the ships rigging, and = the breaking waves in the background. One minor criticism: the image doesn't seem to be well-framed. Why not = move the camera back a ways? This viewer searches for a reason for the = lighthouse to be so dominant in the composition, but can find none. Now = if you added the lighthouse-keeper looking out over the railing with a = small telescope, it would bring this image to a whole new level. ===== From file: nice use of theme, and cool composition. image is slightly grainy, and colors are a bit off in the grassy mountainside. Notable for originality, composition